The actions from one person messed up my life…. I’m not sounding selfish because it’s someone that’s real special in my life, and still to this day that person don’t know that I know the truth. Yea I might of been young but as I get older I know what I saw and felt how she felt. Karma from them made your life go down the drain and even seeing that!! You still refuse to make any type of positive change. And I have to say what the fuck man??
Depending on people that don’t give two Fucks about you Smh! You old enough to realize that the people you call friends utilize you for their own needs, and the reason why is because they know they can walk all over you. How are you a man pretending to be a kid?? I had my time where did things worse than you bit I remain to step up from my karma and turn that into something better, nothing is hard and if you think so it’s because it’s a mind game, can’t you see that man?? No you don’t cause you don’t want to!!!
You piss me off so much but all I can do is love you for taking care of me and me returning to same thing.
Hey it’s 2:27Am I’m not yawning, but according to the time I’m doing nothing but wasting Time - spitting this boring rhyme … But you still read it, young Murray on this Blog i will not be defeated/ I’m a winner to the end buddy, don’t get mad when ur chick send a text buddy/ You be hating that I be getting these huge checks buddy - I’m teach ya to be like me … so focus and study/ When it comes to your girl she always give me cuddy - no lie, why should I! Why would I/ Theirs no sense to … . people ask Murray could I … No could u - say … . The gun talk and drugs, yess but no/ That’s very unnecessary and plus I don’t relate . . - I don’t follow up those actions … thats’ not the food thats on my plate/ its realness … . 24/7 - 365 days… . so lets celebrate! To the young rappers … . Like myself … Who do this thing solo… don’t need no help!!!
“I’m not solo tho cause I have the Fleet behind me … . Pause. But yall know what I mean so yeahhh mannn WUZZ UP!!
Would I . . Ever be the rapper that you love?
Would U . . Ever have my music on your Ipod?
Would I ever be person that you would have up above?
Or Would I just be the person that is Odd???
Can I be the person that you can share with?
Or am I just the dude, that you can’t bother with?
Wondering hurts my mind, cause I never figure out - how people would accept me, my heart is digging out/ fighting thru a struggle that been kicking my ass - Its like a … . douche bag teacher teaching me the negative in class/ I’m determine and driving but my wheels aren’t moving - I’m losing my hope and my skills aren’t improving/ I’m lost … . in a shadow thats covering - The light … . that’s why it hurts when I’m wondering/ The path … that I see is lighting up alittle - I’m between light and dark … . I’m like The Malcolm in the middle/
#6- Y&M Hood Deli
#5- Big Daddys
#4- USA Diner
#3- Johnny Rockets
#2- Jackson Hole
AND BOOOM!!!!! NUMBER UNO!!! ES!!!!!!
CHECKERS!!!!!!! Yes I said it! Checkers because It’s awesome!
When I closed my eyes I seen two things and I find it kind of scary cause I don’t know what it means.
I closed my eyes for the first time and seen myself waking up on a beach … . The sun is setting … . The water is touching my feet and it’s like I can’t move because I’m waiting to stay … . . Theirs a small Island underneath the sunset.
Second Vision …
I yet again open my eyes and see myself falling thru clouds … But as I look down theirs no ground … just more and more clouds, it might sound scary cause I’m falling but honestly I feel relaxed … . .
I think ever since my lil bro Leon told me about these “lucid dreams” and “binaural beats” it made my visions more clear… . . That has to be it, never would I thought that the effect would happen this quickly but it did. And never before was I able to clearly see visions like I was watching a HD TV. It’s weird but I’m going to research this more and see whats what
I loved it. Voice is really amazing. And this lyrics is just the best. I can give first time 10. The best song which i heard here. Intro, ending, middle was the best. Atmopshere is great, and romantic. I want your next track and i will listen to it. Generally all is amazing.
Murray: I thank this person a lot for giving me this review, This just def made my day so I thank you alot! =D
And here is another review for the day!!Score: 8/10
I always enjoy this track and i want to see some more tracks by you.I like the way you sing a song,you are probably a very good rapper and the music is an added advantage,everything worked well.
I uploaded the song onto a site called “Slicethepie.com” And this site is full of music critics! And son they can be reallllly mean lol. But here are some of the things they said about my song!!!
The introduction of this song is nice and the mixing of different instruments is unique. The vocals are powerful enough because even though he is rapping i can clearly hear the words. The lyrics are unique and nicely done and constructed.Score: 7/10
The way the sound of beats and the claps is there in the very starting is fabulous and well presented and the male vocal is also good. Overall a good song and a great composition.Score: 7/10
I guess that this song has a very good soundtrack. The beat is very good. I liked the atmosphere of this song. I enjoyed the fact that this song is very honest. I liked that it is a personal account. I think it is a nice song. I liked the arrangement.Score: 7/10
Nice comedy type of lyrics and comedy was more created because the of the efforts of the singer’s way and style of singing it in that way. The lines, “How can I be so stupid, How can I be so selfish, Oh no, How can I be so meanful” I liked these lines in the style the singer has deliver it. Really good job. However musician team’s work did not impress me too much because they kept continuing the same music through out the song without any kind of variations.Score: 7/10
Interesting song. I like the background music and cool bass. Rhymes blend well with the music. It was fun to listen.
Tomorrow theirs going to be more reviews about the song, they said some bad things about it but I’m not for that talk but regardless NOT EVERYONE will like my music and that goes to every music artist out there! But either way the negative feedback would make me stronger!